Thứ Bảy, 14 tháng 9, 2013

ENTRY1_Trần Thu Huyền_10031185

Item 1: POEM

True Friendship

True friendship isn’t seen with the eyes, it is felt with the heart.
When there is trust, understanding, loyalty, and sharing.
True friendship is a rare feeling, but when it is found
It has profound impact on our well-being, strength, and character.
True friendship does not need elaborate gifts
Or spectacular events in order to be valuable or valued.
To ensure long-lasting quality and satisfaction,
True friendship only needs a few key ingredients:
Undying loyalty, unmatched understanding, unsurpassed trust,
Deep and soulful secrets, and endless sharing.
These ingredients, mixed with personality and a sense of humor,
Can make a friendship last a lifetime!
This is just a thank you, my friend, for all the wonderful and colorful
Special ingredients You’ve brought to my life!
Pass this on to such a friend!

- Author Unknown -



Rhetorical devices: alliteration (true friendship)

Message: We should understand about true friend



Item 2: STORY

The Tortoise and the Hare

The story concerns a hare who ridicules a slow-moving tortoise who challenges him to a race. The hare soon leaves the tortoise behind and, confident of winning, takes a nap midway through the course. The tortoise gets tired but he keeps going. When the hare awakes, however, he finds that his competitor, crawling slowly but steadily, has arrived before him.

Rhetorical devices: Metaphor
-         Hare: people who are arrogance
-         Tortoise: people who are humble.

Message:
In life, if we are arrogance we’ll failure.




 Item 3: CARTOON



Rhetorical devices: Metaphor, Irony, Overstatement

Message: you can creative freedom in your way, you don't need to worry about how others view

5 nhận xét:

  1. in my opinion:
    In Item 1, rhetorical devices: Repetition: true friendship.
    In Item 2, message:in some competitions, people who are arrogance will lose people who are humble.
    In Item 3: you should explain clearly about rhetorical devices used.

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  2. hi Huyền,
    in my opinion,
    in item 2, massage: slow and steady will beat the fast and arrogance.

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  3. Hi Huyen, I have some comments for your entry:
    - In item 1, the message is not clear and you should add repetition in rhetorical devices.
    - In item 3, you should explain more about rhetorical device.

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