Item 1: Poem
The Great Fall!
If all the trees were ONE tree,
What a GREAT tree it would be!
If all the axes were ONE axe,
What a GREAT axe it would be!
If all the seas were ONE sea,
What a GREAT sea it would be!
If all the men were ONE man,
What a GREAT man he would be!
If the great man,
takes the great axe,
Cuts the great tree
and it falls into the great sea,
What a GREAT FALL it would be!
Rhetorical devices
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Rhyme: tree- be
sea- be
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Parallelism: If all…., What a great
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Repetition : One, great
Message: Unity is strength
Item 2: Story
The Cock And The Jewel
A cock was
scratching the ground with his clawslooking fora tasty morsel to eat. While
doing so, he chanced toturn overastoneand find a shining gem under it.
"Cock-a doodle-do !" cried the cock and said, "It looks very fine and it may be valuable to some people. But I would rather have found a nice grain of corn."
"Cock-a doodle-do !" cried the cock and said, "It looks very fine and it may be valuable to some people. But I would rather have found a nice grain of corn."
Rhetorical devices
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Symbol
A Gem- Precious
A Cock- Normal
Message: Value of items depends on
the user and context
Item 3: Cartoon
Rhetorical devices
- - Metaphor
The pitfalls- block No 4, locked cage
Happy- jumping game
- - Symbol
No 4- the death
Pedo bear -The bear has a cute appearance but its image has been
likened to bait used to lure children or as a mascot for pedophiles)
Irony
Message: There is too much pitfall so human being should not run too far from a happy one that had a lot of stick.

In my opinion you should add one rhetorical devices for item 2. This is metaphor
Trả lờiXóaand 2 other item is quite good
Congratulation!
In my opinion,
Trả lờiXóaitem 1 : Repetition : If all the...were one..., What a great...it would be.
item 3: You should add one in Metaphor: The boy(people), Jumping game (all things in life)
I think your messages in all 3 items are quite concise and profound.
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