Item 1: Picture
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Antithesis:
between the declining of the economy and the rising of inflation
Message: The
economy is declining increasingly because of rising inflation.
Item 2: Story
The Boy & the Apple Tree
A long time ago, there was a huge apple tree. A little boy
loved to come and play around it everyday. He climbed to the treetop, ate the
apples, took a nap under the shadow...he loved the tree and the tree loved to
play with him. Time went by...the little boy had grown up and he no longer
played around the tree every day.
One day, the boy came back to the tree and he looked sad.
'Come and play with me' the tree asked the boy. 'I am no longer a kid, I do not
play around trees any more' the boy replied.'I want toys. I need money to buy
them.' 'Sorry, but I do not have money... but you can pick all my apples and
sell them. So, you will have money.' The boy was so excited. He grabbed all the
apples on the tree and left happily. The boy never came back after he picked
the apples.The tree was sad.
One day, the boy who now turned into a man returned and the
tree was excited 'Come and play with me' the tree said. 'I do not have time to
play. I have to work for my family. We need a house for shelter. Can you help
me?'' Sorry, but I do not have any house. But you can chop off my branches to
build your house.' So the man cut all the branches of the tree and left
happily.The tree was glad to see him happy but the man never came back since then.
The tree was again lonely and sad.
One hot summer day, the man returned and the tree was
delighted.'Come and play with me!' the tree said.'I am getting old. I want to
go sailing to relax myself. Can you give me a boat?' said the man.'Use my trunk
to build your boat. You can sail far away and be happy.' So the man cut the
tree trunk to make a boat. He went sailing and never showed up for a long time.
Finally, the man returned after many years.'Sorry, my boy.
But I do not have anything for you anymore. No more apples for you ...' the
tree said.'No problem, I do not have any teeth to bite' the man replied. 'No
more trunk for you to climb on' 'I am too old for that now' the man said.'I
really cannot give you anything... the only thing left is my dying roots' the
tree said with tears. 'I do not need much now, just a place to rest.I am tired
after all these years' the man replied. 'Good! Old tree roots are the best
place to lean on and rest, Come, come sit down with me and rest.' The man sat
down and the tree was glad and smiled with tears...
Rhetorical device:
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Metaphor:
+ The apple tree: Parents
+The boy: Children
+ Toys, the house, the boat: the demands of the children
+ The apples, the branches, the trunk: the sacrifice of parents
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Repetition:
“Come and play with me”.
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Climax:
the boy’s demand: toys – a house – a boat – a place to rest
The tree’s help:
apples – branches – trunk – root
Message: Our
parents are always willing to give us everything we need and ask and never
complain or ask anything in return.
Item 3: Poem
Time
Will Pass
by Janelle
Life is
something you can not fake
you live and
learn from each mistake
Sunny days or
cloudy skies
Happy Greetings
or Sad Goodbyes
So don't sit by
and let time pass
For live each
day like your last
This is
something that you must do
if you expect to
grow and stick it through
All the sadness
all the pain wash
it away like the
rain.
Fast or slow
whatever your pace
take your time
life is not a race.
Rhetorical device:
- Rhyme: fake-mistakes,
skies-Goodbyes, pass-last, do-through, pain-rain, pace-race.
- Antithesis: Sunny days-Cloudy skies, Happy
Greetings-Sad Goodbyes, Fast - slow
Message: We should enjoy every moments your of
our life, whether it's filled with sadness or joy!

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Trả lờiXóaNhận xét này đã bị tác giả xóa.
Trả lờiXóaIn my opinion, item 1 and item 2 are good.
Trả lờiXóaItem 3: Message: Time is precious, we should respect and do not let time pass.
in my point of view:
Trả lờiXóa- item 1 : the effect of inflation on the economy
I think in item 1, Its Mesage is the contrast relationship between inflation and economy
Trả lờiXóaYour entry good.
Trả lờiXóaIn my opinion, in item 2 quite long: Love of parents for their children is to give without getting back.
In item 3, message: Everyone has to appreciate time