Thứ Bảy, 14 tháng 9, 2013

Entry 1_Bùi Thu Trang (09031364_14/10/1991)

Item 1

DREAMS
Hold fast to dreams
For if dreams die
Life is a broken-winged bird
That cannot fly.
Hold fast to dreams
For when dreams go
Life is a barren field
Frozen with snow. 


(Langston Hughes)

+ Rhetorical devices: rhym (repeat “hold fast”, die - fly), symbol.

+ Message:  We can’t live without dreams.

Item 2

A GLASS OF MILK

One day, a poor boy who was selling goods from door to door to
pay his  way through school, found he had only one thin dime left,
and he was hungry.

He decided he would ask for a meal at the next house. However,
he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door.
Instead of a meal he  asked for a drink of water. She thought he looked
hungry so brought him a large glass of milk.

He drank it slowly, and then asked, "How much do I owe you?"
"You don't owe me anything," she replied."Mother has taught us
never to accept pay for a kindness."  He said..... "Then I thank
you from my heart." As Howard Kelly left that house, he not only
felt stronger physically, but his faith in God and man was strong also.
He had been ready to give up and quit.

Year's later that young woman became critically ill. The local
doctors were baffled. They finally sent her to the big city,
where they called in specialists to study her rare disease.
Dr. Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation. When he
heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light
filled his eyes.

Immediately he rose and went down the hall of the hospital to
her room. Dressed in his doctor's gown he went in to see her. He
recognized her at once. He went back to the consultation room
determined to do his best to save her life. From that day he gave special
attention to the case.

After a long struggle, the battle was won.  Dr. Kelly requested
the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval.
He looked at it, then wrote something on the edge and the bill
was sent to her room. She feared to open it, for she was sure it
would  take the rest of her life to pay for it all. Finally she
looked, and something caught her attention on the side of the bill.
She read these words..... "Paid in full with one glass of milk". Signed:
Dr.  Howard Kelly.

Rhetorical Devices: Metaphor_ a glass milk (kindness)

Message: Kindness will never be forgotten.

Item 3

Rhetorical Devices:
Metaphor: the man who say “You, Salary, why are you not growing. All your friends are now growing up” (the worker); The shortest man (salary), three man other (the living of cost)

Message: Worker’s the living of cost is increasing except the salary.




5 nhận xét:

  1. Hello Trang,
    In my opinion,

    Item 1:
    Rhetorical devices
    - Metaphor : life - a broken-winged bird; life - a barren field
    - Rhyme : die - life - fly
    - Repetition :
    Hold fast to dreams
    For...
    Life is...
    - Parallelism :
    Hold fast to dreams Hold fast to dreams
    For if dreams die For when dreams go
    Life is a broken-winged bird Life is a barren field
    That cannot fly. Frozen with snow.
    Message
    Life without dreaming is a life without meaning, so keep dreaming.

    This is just my personal opinion
    Hope to get feedback from you
    Thanks for reading.
    Good day ^^

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  2. In my opinion,
    Item 3: Metaphor: Three other mans (goods, materials,food... in daily life)
    Item 1 and Item 2 are good!

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  3. Item 1, Rhetorical Devices: Repetition : Hold fast to dreams- For...- Life is...

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  4. In my opinion, your homework so good.
    In item 3, Message: the life is too difficul because cost is increasing except the salary.

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  5. I want to add some rhetorical devices in item 3

    - Antithesis: salary is quite short with sad face while fuel, bread and meat are tall with happy face.
    - rhetorical question: salary why are you not growing?
    because a rhetorical question is intended as a challenge, with the implication that the question is difficult or impossible to answer. people do not expect the answer

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